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Silver ([personal profile] i_love_freddie) wrote2014-03-24 03:59 pm
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LJ Idol Season 9 Week 2: The Missing Stair

The boy shivered and placed his foot on the first step. 'One...'

Jonas paused and glanced at his appreciative audience. His younger half-brother Cory, and the young wolf-man Phellan, were listening to him intently. On the other side of the tiny camp fire, their companions seemed to be sleeping soundly despite the light wind and the rocky ground.

One by one, he counted down his steps while his friend waited anxiously at the top. 'Two... three... four... five... six... seven... eight...'

There was a slight chill in the night air. Cory shifted closer to the fire, grateful for the heat that the flames provided. The wizard continued with the story, his voice low.

There were ten steps in all. Nico waited, almost holding his breath, as his friend ventured down. 'Nine...' came the slightly frightened voice from below. There was a pause. 'Ten...' Nico gave a sigh of relief and was about to call down when something stopped him in his tracks. His friend's voice continued in a flat tone: 'Eleven... twelve... thirteen... fourteen...'

“What happened?” Cory whispered.

“No one knows. According to the account, it was first assumed that the boy was messing around and a full search of the cellar was made. But no trace of him was ever found. Supposedly a true story.”

“It really happened?” Phellan asked innocently, his eyes wide. Having spent his whole life in a tribe of his own kind, so much of the way of humans was new to him – and so he was more than a little naïve.

Jonas nodded. “There were other stories too – apparently staircases are really common in tales of random disappearances. Another I read was about this shack in the wilderness. It is old and falling apart, but all the furniture remains inside – like the owners just upped and left one day. Behind the shack is a set of broken stairs that seem to lead down to nowhere. Some say the bodies of the former residents are buried down there, others say that you will meet the shadow monster down there.”

Phellan stared at him. “Shadow monster?”

“Yep,” Jonas was really getting into his stride. “Legend says that all you can see of him are two red eyes lurking in the blackness. If you offer him something – like your youth or your wisdom – he will grant you a wish and let you live. Refuse, and he will take your life.”

Seeing that he had their full attention, he continued. “Another story – I actually read this one in a book - is about a staircase somewhere in the countryside. It is supposedly difficult to find because everything around it is overgrown; but certain people will stumble across it. The steps lead down to the deepest reaches of the hells, where all the torture takes place and demons run riot. One rumour says that two young men found it one spring day, and when one of them started to descend, some unseen force grabbed him and dragged him down screaming. He was never seen again.”

“Wow... that is kind of creepy,” Cory said quietly. Phellan said nothing, just stared at Jonas with his eyes wide.

“I know,” the wizard said nonchalantly. “Well, that's enough story-telling for tonight. It is time for me to sleep. Goodnight, pleasant dreams.”

“Cory?” Phellan whispered nervously. “We won't have to go down any stairs again, will we?”

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It was during the next afternoon, while they were wandering the forest looking for herbs for Valia to use in potion-making, that Cory, Phellan and Jonas just happened to discover the stone steps leading down into the earth. Covered partly with bushes, there were no buildings or foundations or anything – just those stairs leading down into darkness.

“Cory?” Phellan eyed the staircase warily. “Will there be a monster down there?”

“I don't think so, Phellan.”

“But maybe the stairs will just go on and on and never end? Maybe we will be trapped forever? And just have to keep counting and counting?”

“I think that is very unlikely. Those were just stories. But if it makes you feel better... we could always push Jonas down them and see if he hits the bottom.”

“Hey!” The wizard glared over at them. “That's not funny.”

“Well, this is your fault,” Cory shot back. “You and your stories. Now get down there and show Phellan that there is nothing to be afraid of.”

“I don't want to go - ” Jonas started. At that moment Riandur came out through the trees – concerned that they had maybe gotten lost - and crashed into the man. As Jonas stumbled forward, his boot caught a tree root and he toppled down the slippery stone steps.

Riandur sighed. “Why was he standing there?” he asked no one in particular. Cory and Phellan exchanged a glance, trying not to laugh.

“Are you all right down there?” Cory called down to his half-brother. A groan came back in response. “I guess it isn't a never-ending staircase then?”

“Any monsters down there?” Phellan asked.

“Just a lot of mud and slime. And I'm not okay. Everything hurts.”

Cory smiled at Phellan. “You want to go down and help him?”

The young wolf-man regarded the steps uneasily. It was hard to know what scared him more; the scary stories or seeing Jonas flying down head first. “I guess so... I really don't think I like stairs though.”

[identity profile] elledanger.livejournal.com 2014-03-24 10:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I like this.

[identity profile] i-love-freddie.livejournal.com 2014-03-24 10:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I enjoyed writing it. :)
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[identity profile] x-disturbed-x.livejournal.com 2014-03-25 03:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh do I hate scary stories! Not this one though. I mean the one in the story. :P

[identity profile] i-love-freddie.livejournal.com 2014-03-26 10:23 pm (UTC)(link)
lol I love them, but not when I am on my own. Sometimes I scare myself writing scary stories. :P

[identity profile] lawchicky.livejournal.com 2014-03-25 09:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooh creepy!

[identity profile] i-love-freddie.livejournal.com 2014-03-26 10:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Good, that's exactly what I was hoping for!

[identity profile] i-17bingo.livejournal.com 2014-03-26 06:51 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, campfire tales! Will you ever fail to entertain me? And will you ever fail to scare the bejeezus out of children/the childlike?

[identity profile] i-love-freddie.livejournal.com 2014-03-26 10:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Campfire tales are the best!

[identity profile] basric.livejournal.com 2014-03-26 09:49 am (UTC)(link)
An interesting take on the prompt. I enjoyed.

[identity profile] i-love-freddie.livejournal.com 2014-03-26 10:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I wasn't completely sure if it would fit at first, but I am pleased with how it turned out.

[identity profile] ecosopher.livejournal.com 2014-03-26 12:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Haha, I'm glad they got Jonas to go down first :D It kind of serves him right!

[identity profile] i-love-freddie.livejournal.com 2014-03-26 10:18 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL, it does, doesn't it? I can't help but have the suspicion that it was a bit intentional on Riandur's part... ;-)

[identity profile] iwriteflash.livejournal.com 2014-03-26 03:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Hey! This is cool!

[identity profile] i-love-freddie.livejournal.com 2014-03-26 10:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, I'm pleased with how it turned out in the end.

[identity profile] cheshire23.livejournal.com 2014-03-27 03:59 am (UTC)(link)
Ouch. That kind of fall could be almost as bad as taking chances with the monster. :/

[identity profile] i-love-freddie.livejournal.com 2014-03-27 07:16 pm (UTC)(link)
True, though my guys are used to accidents like that. You can't be an adventurer without getting the cuts and bruises and scraps and broken bones. I think he got off quite lightly!

[identity profile] halfshellvenus.livejournal.com 2014-03-27 06:44 am (UTC)(link)
Poor Phellan, who doesn't really understand humans and really doesn't understand the appeal of the recreational spookiness that comes from ghost-type stories. :D

[identity profile] i-love-freddie.livejournal.com 2014-03-27 07:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Heh, yeah he certainly has a lot to learn. :D

[identity profile] n3m3sis43.livejournal.com 2014-03-27 11:09 am (UTC)(link)
I like the climactic yet anticlimactic ending. :)

[identity profile] i-love-freddie.livejournal.com 2014-03-27 07:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I sometimes have trouble with endings, but this one just seemed to fit. :)

[identity profile] kehlen-crow.livejournal.com 2014-03-27 03:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Very nice. Well structured, believable and warm :) (I was half-expecting the real stairs to be cursed, too ^_^)

[identity profile] i-love-freddie.livejournal.com 2014-03-27 07:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Hehe it was tempting but I thought that might be a little *too* cruel - if the real stairs had been cursed, Phellan probably would have been terrified of steps for the rest of his life!

[identity profile] binaryorchid.livejournal.com 2014-04-03 06:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely piece :).

[identity profile] i-love-freddie.livejournal.com 2014-04-06 01:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :)